aw... he killed himself.

this story is really sad. but i like it..

aw... that's so sweet and tragic.. love the story.:D

Powerful last line. Love it.

wow, i had chills reading this, especially at the end. love is so complex; alas, if it only made sense.

wow, and it was a true story too, of course. very complex...very dramatic...exceptionally well written. and that last line, amazingly powerful. loved it...as sad as it was, it was wonderful.

A bit too dramatic for my liking.

very powerful, wonderful piece of literature!

Wow...that was really a gorgeous piece. Sure, it was sad, but it effectively and eloquently got the point across. Beautiful work! :)

Your writing was exemplary. I wish I could say the same for the plotline.. but anything that's not worth living for definetly isn't worth dying for. Maybe it's becuse I'm strongly aganist suicide but I think the matter was dealt with in a neat way.

I felt sorry for the poor guy, but why waste your life on someone that was never there? He was better off without her.

The writing was really good though.

Great job.

WOW! that was well written, it was very sad and i was very surprised when i noticed that it was a true story.

It's great. The style that you wrote this in is very nice. How you only specified the difference in him and him through a change in the way the font looked but still played your reader's emotions to realize the difference. The story has a great moral, and I'll be running off to read your other stories.

True story? Wow...

they were weak. i don't know if i have pity for them at all.

:-(

Who is she?

Beautiful in that sad and haunting way... Beautiful.