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Reviews For: Broken Planks
lehal10
2006-05-10
ch 1, 		abuseThis is like one of my fav poems that you wrote! I really like the rhyme scheme...keep writing!
Rhianika
2006-05-09
ch 1, 		abuseI like the rhyme :) That was the first thing that really stood out to me. It didnt seem like it was forced either, which was good. Nice poem. I liked the comparisons.

Keep writing

~Rhia
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