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Nice, I liked the story, very vague and up to interpretation as all good poems are. That gives the English teachers of the world lots and lots to talk about since they know EXACTLY what EVERY poet was thinking when he wrote it. It was good though, it had a concise story line while leaving enough imagination to keep you thinking and guessing. I liked it.

Awesome! Reminds me a little of the Adam and Eve story. Great mystical feel to this. Keep it up!

Took me a moment to remember Pluto and Hades are the same...heehee...for a second I was sitting there thinking that it sounded a lot like Persephone...anyways...more mythology! I'm addicted...it makes me want to write something mythological...likely a story...therefore I had better wait...*sighs*