Diana is the Roman version of Greek Artemis, right? She's my favorite goddess :D. I really like different points of view, that's a unique thing I haven't seen before, and the writing is overall really good.

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It was good, very nice detail in the opening stanzas. Personally, I thought the end could be wrapped up better. The previous stanzas were full of vision and feeling, the last 2 stanzas just didn't seem to have the heart and feeling in them. I am sorry I am being blunt. I did like it though.

Beautiful imagery, and I loved the concept of Diana. Very well done!

oh dark but very natural. Does that make sence? Anyways I like very much, like a short story, great write.

I'm familiar with the myth of Diana...but I really am going to have to ask for an explanation of this poem. I like it a lot...but I want to make sure I actually am understanding it correctly...otherwise I will be very confused...