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Reviews For: Another Cup of Tea

Itsuyaya
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseWow. You're too good a writer for your own good. You should stick FictionPress on a shelf and start trying to findsomeone to publish your work. It's really good. Honestly. My friends and family say that *I* have a passion for writing and it's *good*, but, honestly, you are a better writer with twice, if not triple, my passion. I've always hoped to be wandering through a book store and one of my books on the shelf, but you know what would be better? If I saw your book (or books). Then I could say that I knew you. Well, sort of. Later! ^-^!
SamanthaNicole
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseLovely oneshot.

I've always wondered about this particular topic - falling out of love. How can people promise that they'll love each other forever? Forever's a long time, and look at the divorce rates in our country alone. It's sad to see that this happens so often.

Loved it. Good for you.

Cheers,
Sammy
tawnyfawn
2006-05-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love emotional pieces like this, where rather than being completely over-the-top there's just a restrained sense of emotion, almost suspensful.

It's definitly sad, and I like the references to things the reader doesn't really know about, but that leave the reader to draw their own colcusions. Eg) the man in the bookshop (whoever he may be).

It's a great idea, too. So kudos. ^^
Plastic Roses Never Die
2006-05-09
ch 1,
abusenice short piece. its so sad, the thought of "falling out of love"
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