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| Grace1o9 2008-10-14 ch 1,   | hey your poem is not bad at all and yes real life sucks ,and hey your poem was like me my ex- boy friend did that to me and he almost going to ask this other girl out ,but I found out before he even ask her ... Hey sorry i was like that write because really your poem was good ,but hey is it ok if you can like review my story Sunset by grace1o9... |
| shakeyourheaditsempty 2008-05-16 ch 1, | breathe stop breathing /this is lovely. |
| multiples of six 2007-12-25 ch 7, | Aww.. I know what you mean.. and it's hard to find that in one person. =( I think the last line was supposed to say "so much" not "so mush" though.. |
| Klutzilla 2007-11-16 ch 1, | Wow, very strong wording, definitely the end. lol, it was a sad poem and so true. Life really does suck sometime. To tell you the truth, nothing's wrong with this poem, not perfect, cause' nothing's perfect, but yah...pretty good. Definitely goin in favorites. :P |
| Carmel March 2007-11-11 ch 6, | Wonderful in so many ways :) ~Carm~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-14 ch 1, | That's so sad. Obviously he didn't deserve you. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| J.E.Wyatt 2007-05-22 ch 1, | I loved the ending. "Good by **." Very...hmm...catchy? |
| Carmel March 2007-05-18 ch 5, | Simply amazing. |
| burruss 2007-05-09 ch 1, | this ** is fire!! i feel u and when ma boyfriend kalled to break up wit me i said goodbye ** too!! keep doin u |
| multiples of six 2007-05-01 ch 4, | This one here is gorgeous. |
| Carmel March 2007-05-01 ch 4, | Oh, that was an amazing poem. Powerful, full of feeling...just amazing :) ~carm~ |
| AluminumMuse 2007-04-30 ch 1, | I love the last line, this poem kicks some **. |
| Carmel March 2007-04-25 ch 3, | Wow. An excellent collection of works. Good job! It was personal, yet I could definitely relate. Hope to see more like this from you! ~carm~ |
| say this sooner 2007-04-22 ch 1, | powerful. nice work. |
| ilikemykitty 2007-04-17 ch 1, | I don't think it's a bad poem, although I do agree that real life can such sometimes. Despite the fact that it doesn't have a rhyme scheme, I still think it's a decent poem. |