Aw, that's depressing. But that was an excellent story. I don't think I saw anything incorrect grammer wise. Great work!

Aww, I like this story... One thing that you might be able to add is more actual dialougue, like you did at the end, so it seems less like it's just being explained. It was really good though, the characters definetely seemed real and the flow of the story made me want to keep on reading until the end! :) It was sad but really good!

Stephish

I like this. Stories with unhappy endings are always good!

Spawny

Aw. That was sad and touching. The way you went to great lengths to describe a relationship from a distance didn't leave a positive impression on me at first - I kept wishing there would be more dialogue or something - but then I really appreciate the effect it had on the end. I also love how this was really realistic. Since my graduation is really close as well, I'm able to appreciate that sense of losing relationships - both friendly and romantic - because time for development is running out. Wonderful job!

took your advide and redid the storyenjoy