Sadly, you are going to be shocked, I'm going to quote Mc Donalds (Shock horror) I'm loving it. Its a good, yet a sad story, the sort I like to read. Good work Helen.

From some weird guy

wow, so sad! wonderful imagery, i love it! ^^

wow it's a very deep story that says a lot. Sad. Scary (i have a fear of fire) and well very well written. Good job with this. i like it a lot.

that was...depressing...and i guess really iono, but it's beautiful.