You lied. You said 'No one ever said I could write poetry'. I said so! Millions of times. :) You’re too critical of yourself. Interesting illustration you have painted. Darkly beautiful, thought provoking, profound. I especially liked ‘Blank eyes open, Blind but seeing all, Watching the world pass him by.’ Very well done. I have nothing but praise to offer, for I myself cannot write poetry. It would, therefore, be unfair for me to criticize it. ~Translucently Opaque

I love this poem! Those angels on the stones are rather...not creepy, but it's like...what are they thinking about? (If they do think)

Great job! I loved the imagery!

It definately is very depictive in its descriptions. Dark, cold, beautiful in its words. Fantastic piece.

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