this is twisted but in a good way. it kept me intrigued and i liked the lines,
"She will break,
her skin embedded in yours(forever)"

i can feel deep hatred in this poem. it is very good.
there are only two things that i saw wrong; 'andher'--and her, 'the distort'--that distort.
-thank you for the review-
i love this...u are very talented! good work. :D

You are correct, I don't know what you're talking about. Please explain?

About the poem though, it was very good. It seemed maybe like it should go on longer but I liked the style and the rytham to it.

She sounds like a syringe...But hey, this piece is well written. Your summary made me very curious and I'm glad it sparked curiosity lolz

Woah this is really good. I like your style of writing.

P.S. Thanks 4 the review

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I honestly don't get it...Constance

Excellent Poem! Very ddescriptive. Enjoyed reading this poem!

wicked! My type of stuff you got there

Wow. This is good. I like it! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

for some odd reason, this kind of reminds me of either frankenstein or chuckie. at any rate, it's a really good poem! great images. very creepy, but in the good way... yeah. great job! also, thanks for the review.

this is heavy..the imagery of the words are really cool..

Wow, awesome concept! I LOVE it! Great job, especially love the last five lines. Awesome. Thanks for the review, and I know, that poem was sickly sweet. It's almost to sickly sweet for me!

~dragonzz~

hey, I read this on your DA account :giggles: Hey...lolz...great poem i L.O.V.E you ^_~...lolz :huggles: Keep writing yo! TTYL

~G-Way (lolz)

The poem was good, morbid but really good, I'll check out your other poetry. * Thanks for your review on my story Experimental Death*

O... strange... I like strange. Made of Glass and Oh so easy to break...

Lovin it!

Catchya, Dani