I have to say, you sure put alot of feeling inside your writing! I love it! It is very good! You have a lot of talent, that is for sure! Well, I wish to know more in the next one of how the plot is going to be shaped as I read it...however, I have to ask...is the mood of the story always going to be this dark? Just wondering.

Wow, it's been a while since I've been to fictionpress. But was I ever glad to hear from you!This was...mildly confusing. Amazing work of course, as always, and I'm certain it will become clearer as time goes on. This was, after all, only the prologue. Your writing is golden. It simply astounds me.

Khazia*~