Reviews for A Little More Touch Me

Reviews For: A Little More Touch Me

Back of Beyond 2007-09-09 ch 1,	abuseSounds like it will be a really good story - hope you get round to updating this soon. :D
Aki to Tarou 2007-03-23 ch 1,	abuseAll that bickering... they're sexually frustrated, let them have sex already xD. jk jk, but really, nice introduction~! Awkward confessions... especially to your best friend who is also the same sex lol. Oi, makes me feel antsy and awkward all over too lol. You really do have a talent for writing!! I need to read more to improve my starving skills :(. I'm quite sad in that category even though I think I have spanktackingly awesome ideas . :3 lick lick ~Sei
Lynn's Love 2006-12-06 ch 1,	abuseYou're crazy, and i love the beginning. This could be an "interesting" story, i'm waiting for more! -opti
Icarus-Rising 2006-10-30 ch 1,	abuseI would really like to see the prequel to this… it would be interesting to read about how a close friendship gets damaged by a fight. But first, please continue with this! Thanks for reading my story as well
kristalyn 2006-10-04 ch 1,	abuseGood start! Now I really want to know exactly why Jay and Dom fought. Update soon please :)
The Kait of Lin 2006-06-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm impressed, Tori! Its really awesome. Of course, nothing different than anything else you ever write...you tard. I bet that you didn't think I'd read this, huh? You said that you'd have stuff on another username, but I figured I'd check anyway. You know that my opinion of slash stories has changed significantly... And this one is especially well written and awesome so far. Again, nothing unusual there. Update soon, tori! I shall be reminding you... evil cackle ~Kaitlin
Ballerina with a Gun 2006-05-13 ch 1,	abuseYum...slash. Explicit content I hope. Great story so far--I look forward to more! Hope you update soon!
Pink Funky Squish 2006-05-12 ch 1,	abuseGood so far. It definitely has potential! :-)
XgainMyAgainX 2006-05-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseSurprised? Huh? "Dream'o'rdoll"? Lol Just kidding around. All-around a good story, good use of fore-shadowing and loved the intro. Didn't know you wrote these kinds of stories...but I ain't judging you. Hopefully Kait won't read it. Oh well. This piece of work is certainly greater than mine, but still. You've talent I don't know why you don't use it more often. Well that's all basically, you didn't think I'd read it, did you? Well...I'm good like that, I guess I am awesome! Just like you. Anyway, l like it and since I am a critic I will tell you a little bit of what you needed. The setting, work on it a tad more; you did mention it, but not enough uhh whats that called? I dunno but you needed a lil more of that and I loved the dialogue, it was P-E-R-F-E-C-T! The feelings and emotions as well. hm, what else? Well thas it I'm eager to read the next part and you know I WILL find it. alright thats about it... ok? kisses XgainMyAgainX-Melissa
firestater-666 2006-05-10 ch 1,	abusei like it, its good so fair cant wait for more. Good job xD
Esquirella 2006-05-10 ch 1,	abuseVery cool set up here.
Jayn 2006-05-10 ch 1,	abuseI like it! ^_^ It seems pretty interesting. Please update!
Abstruse Blue 2006-05-09 ch 1,	abuseIt has a really good intriguing start. I'm looking forward to further chapters, keep it up. is really interested in where this will go ^ ^
Broken doll on a dirty shel... 2006-05-09 ch 1,	abuseI liked it, I've been off lately besides updates and looking for Slash has really become a hassle since it's rise in the popularity charts but seeing the summary for yours drew me in so I decided I'd like to check it out and an glad I did. I love this already. The imagery of the characters is awesome and the whole first chapter was really intruiging. And you used Fallout Boy. How could I NOT love you? Well, if you don't mind, I'd like to add this to my shelf (check profile for details). It belongs there, in my book. Harlequin~"I'm not trying to be someone I'm not; I'm trying to be someone you want."

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