I adore this poem. I can't believe I haaven't found it before. The writing is great- just makes me want to print it out and put it up in my room.

I find those are often the best kinds.
I like this, it's rhyming but not overly so.
Pretty, good job.

god, those first seven lines are absolutely stunning. a good solid rhythm as well. i can never pull off rhymes without feeling like a dork, but you've got it.

wow. i love poems like this, they just have such a great flow and beat and they just sound so good and mean so much. it all just rushes out, but it rushes out well. great. : )

amazing Ellaamazing Ellatrulyprobably my favorite of all your poems

GREAT WORK, UR WORDS FLOW...

your writing is a drug, too.

Ella, that was amazing. Like, absolutely GORGEOUS. And I like the bit of rhyme, even if it was intentional(sp?). But, I loved it.