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This had me so. Every line just had me hooked, sunked and drowning in what it was.

Beautiful, plain and simple.

~* Noelle

I dont exactly know the meaning behind this one but it has that creepy feel that youre so good at and that I love to read so much

beautiful.

i can relate to that one.

That was a beutiful poem. Amazing. Everything was perfect, I really liked it. Especially the 3rd and last standza.

really interesting and beautifully written. Amazing imagery, keep it up.

Very interesting message in this, I love the third stanza the most. "speak to me of sunshine walks..." nice job. :) ~*

the last few stanzas almost flow like sound lyrics. very pretty. love 'night romps by the sea' heh romps.

keep smiling

'pretending i was a **'. this was really well written, melikes.