This is so sweet. I love haikus but am not brave enough to attempt them. I love this its so touching! :-)

gorgeous writing.. little bits and pieces of heartbreak.. a nice read..

I like the daises wind thing... well done

I really like this... its sweet... i also really love the title... great job

I like this piece a lot.. i can definately relate.. short and very true

:(

oh i love the comparison here.

-naomi

interesting. i like the feeling of this one.

-naomi

mm sad.

horrible situation.. well described

I love this the full moon versus the broken heart.. awesome piece

nice similie.. used a lot, but still great

i love the contrast of freezing and burning

interesting... let's the reader chose why time is running out.. i like it

im not sure why there's no space bw and and we'll if its intentional or not

anyhow i dont like this one as much as the rest.. the know me thing seemed kinda weird