i really like the third stanza. not sure why but i do. this is really nicely written... your name... 'in the brink of damnation'... i dunno... its nice. i like this poem. it has a lot to it.

Wow, what an intimate poem. I love how there is a very vague ryhme scheme, because I can barely notice it. It was extremely deep, and your word choice was so precise and the italics just made it basically a sureal poem. It was wonderful piece of literature.

P.S.- Thanks for reviewing my poems, check more of them out...we seem to share similar likes in poetry.

-Dameavar

Breathtaking! That's beautiful. Great work--your style rocks.

Thanks so much for the review.

i actually liked this quite lots...loved the imagery, which is obvi. good read.