hey, I really really like this. it's kinnda mysterious and just the way you start it, the leaf boats and "sink" written like that. brilliant.

wow. really intense. i wish i could write like that i really like that way you spread out the words 'sink' and capitalised angsty. but very cool. (:

hey i really like this, it was a neat idea and flowed quite well

Very artful. I like how you draw out the word sink and the line about the leaves being boats. Nice.

Nice. Very emotional, strong imagery, and I loved the way you spaced it.

Wow... this is awesome... I like how you put the word "sink" vertically... it makes the poem much more interesting... no mistakes I could find... well done...

oh i loved the imager...you portrayed the feeling of stuggling quite well..my fav line was "Let me drown so I'll know life." and this one was really powerful "You're rippin' the skin from my bones." Good Job.

Very dark. I love the imagery!

Awesomeness... and why the heck does it let you use your format... gah you must teach me your secrets. Great job again Slink

wonderful poem, I liked the lines "Let me drown so I'll know me and leave my soul behind." especially.

Interesting and intruiging poem. The sense of struggle was described intensely. Good poem :)

simple yet nyc _

RoK oN!