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| Love Eternally 2008-03-27 ch 18,  | abuseYour stories always end so sad. Its heart breaking. |
| Ty Taco 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is heart braking. I love with a man just out of reach. Pity. |
| angel953 2007-04-12 ch 18, | abuseAh! I love this story! I laughed. I cried. It was the feel-good story of the year(well maybe not...i exaggerate a lot) great job I LOVED Hazel's character...but then you KILLED HIM! wha...anyways this was great and i can't wait to read the sequel! |
| Kizuna 2006-12-03 ch 17, | abuseI hate Chris more and more! Seriously... He could at LEAST have broken up with Riley beore he SLEPT with MATT! GYAH!! I'm getting so angry at him..^^ And no, no happy ending for Riley and Chris...! That's my opinion!! Riley deserves so much more than that... PERSOn-THING! Err... Hahah, yeah, that's what Chris is...:p So, one chapter left if this story... GAH, a little sad, but there are sequels!!^__^ |
| Kizuna 2006-12-03 ch 16, | abuseGoddammit! I seriously HATE Chris! What a freaking, fucking BASTARD! GYAH! Riley deserves so much BETTER than an absentminded-cheating boyfriend! Hopefully you mean the same thing!!^__~ |
| Kizuna 2006-12-03 ch 15, | abuseYou are so evil!! Killing Hazel?!! I loved Hazel! Ah, now I'm getting depressed... *eyes filling with tears* Poor Hazel... He's gone... And what about CHRIS?!! What a bastard... Cheating on Riley with Matt... Who is crazy... Throwing darts and stuff... GAH!! How can he? And Riley still cared about him... Not good... *shakes head* Well, on to the next chapter... I can't stop reading right now...^^ I'm supposed to sleep though, cause I have school in the morning...^^ But pssh... Who cares!! This is way to good..!!^__^ And depressing...^__~ |
| Kizuna 2006-12-03 ch 14, | abuseGAH, what are Hazel thinking?? Whores and stuff? And so much cutting?!! Well, glad he decided that he wanted help!!^__^ Very, very good!!^^ I hope he gets better..!! And what's going on with Chris?? Why didn't he want to kiss Riley?? Is he cheating on him?? *muttering* |
| Kizuna 2006-12-03 ch 13, | abuseI liked Kowa, glad to hear he will be a main character!!^__^ He didn't tell Dr. Strait about Haze though... Hmm... He will still be going to him right, or is Riley finished with the therapy now??^^ And then... off to the next chapter!!^__~ |
| Kizuna 2006-12-03 ch 12, | abuseMatt seemed a little crasy...^__~ Throwing darts like that, it could be dangerous!!^__~ Well, Riley's not hurt, and Chris loves him... But... I'm just a little worried... He didn't come to the hospital when Rile ywas there before after all of his other friends...:-/ And what about Haze?? I miss Haze... Where's Hazel??^__^ Yeah, he wasn't there for Riley either... Anyway, have to go and see if Riley told Dr. Strait about him and Haze sleeping toghether!!^__^ |
| Kizuna 2006-12-03 ch 11, | abuseDr. Strait seem cool!!^__^ Will there be more of him??^__^ Anyway, I'm brain dead right now, so I don't have that awfully much to say... Just that I love this story!!^__^ And that I'm going to the next chapter now!!^__~ |
| Kizuna 2006-12-02 ch 10, | abuseWhy didn't Chris get there before?? And why didn't Haze care that Riley never followed him out of the bathroom or got back to the apartment??!! Hmm... Do they even care about Riley?? Well, off to the next chapter!!^__^ |
| Kizuna 2006-12-02 ch 9, | abuseOMG, he's a cutter!! Poor Haze... I still like Hazel, he's so sweet!! And really, Riley didn't exactly fight that much against him, right?? So technically, it wasn't a rape... Maybe...^^ I hope Riley, or someone, can help Hazel... Poor Haze... *feel so sorry for him* |
| Kizuna 2006-12-02 ch 8, | abuseThis was a sad chapter... Very, very sad... But still very, very good!!^__^ I like Riley a lot... But he's stopped eating... GAH, he really is hurting himself with that... Poor boy... I hope Chris can help him!!^__^ |
| Kizuna 2006-11-30 ch 7, | abuseDoes Haze really like Riley?? As in, is he in love with him??^^ I still like Hazel...!!^__~ But I wonder what'll happen now... And I don't like Matt right now... He's trying, (with his eyes), to take Chris away from Riley!!^^ |
| Kizuna 2006-11-30 ch 6, | abuseYey, they kissed!!^__^ He finally told him, I'm so glad for that!!^^ So, I hope they're a couple now!!^^ But... I don't want to hate Hazel.. *pout* I like Hazel.. Seriously, will you make me hate him?? And then... On to the next chapter..!^__^ |