Very good. Great imagery - loved the bit about the rainbows between the sprinkler jets.

Beautiful. You've got a wonderful grasp of language.

i agree. it's deeper than spring fever that makes you need to be happy. =)

You know, I think these "rainstorms" are why God created life's little unbrellas - best friends. =)

This is sad...but sweet at the same time.

~Christine~

Despite the pessimism of the narrator, the poem turned out to be quite postive in the end, when they waited for 'my rainstorm/ to clear'. Good poem :)

great last two stanza. i especially enjoyed the 2nd last stanza. nice work :P