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Formerly 2006-05-11 . chapter 1
Why would you post this boring, worthless ** on a public forum?
Faithless Juliet 2006-05-11 . chapter 1
A bit rant-ish but also stylish and strong throughout most of this. I loved how you opened it - really grabbed my attention and kept me reading throughout.

I really know how you feel in this, throughout my parent’s separation, getting back together, and then finally divorce I was often put in the middle of the argument. I’ve never had a real relationship with my father and for most of my life he was abusive to us, but I remember the look in his eyes when I chose to live with my mother - he was hurt, and though I don’t want to dismiss all of the pain he’s caused us, I understand that he himself doesn’t understand what he does. I know how ** up parents can be, and how hard it is to understand and or forgive (and keep in mind that I haven‘t forgiven my father,) but in a way I understand that he can’t help himself, maybe that’s the cause with your mother.

Well put together, an essay of heartstrings and emotions rather then fact vs. fiction, we all play both fields for life. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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