I love the line "like the sun took a bite of ice-cream" and the My Chemical Romance song. Really I just love this poem, it's wonderously written and the topic-Oh! The topic! Such well written deployment about such a blatant task.

I like the line "kiss me like you used to!" with the exclamation point and how you repeated it twice. Interesting.

OMG. this is amazing. i love the style and i definately can relate. great work!

-fallingxstars