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Reviews For: Renegade Gods

GaelynX 2006-10-03 ch 7,	abuseYay! Another new chapter!
ArtsyTartsy86 2006-10-02 ch 7,	abuseYou are so trying to drive me up a wall around a tree nad into a lake of insanity. Scary thing is you may have suceeded. Wow, I mean wow. That was intense. She seems a little angry at HAverick and with Danica's words I can only confirm my suspicions concerning a couple people. If I'm wrong well then you're just trying to throw me off. You partially answered one of my questions about what was up with Satzine. A god killer, good too know but there's more nad it's important and I once again have my suspicions and they involve the Kashanei, but we'll leave that alone. Well fantabulous job. Very happy to see your return and all hopes go to anather chapter faster than this one...but i can be a patient little girl. Well I'll try anyway. ~Artsy
ArtsyTartsy86 2006-07-01 ch 6,	abuseSee, now you just have me confused. I think you put that part about Lillith in there simply to make me liek her some. Well I'm not sure if it worked. I mean it did at first, but then, you just kicked my suspicions right back up there with Orins sketchy answers. What in the world are you hiding. it's so not fair. Pouts Orin has a thing for Danica! Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...does a little dance...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin loves Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica...Orin likes Danica... Yeah, that part made me smile, and then I couldn't help but smile again at the ending of Satzine and Orins convo, so mushy gushy, I was all heart fluttering happy to hear it. Yet I fell as if there is a bit of heart break on the way. I also love Vu-Rath, but something seems a little fishy, I'll have to run that by you later! Hugs and Smoochies
ArtsyTartsy86 2006-06-29 ch 5,	abuseYES! I did it. I killed the Nim. Tee Hee, just kidding. Cuz if you were dead then I wouldn't get updates and we all know how i need my updates. I mean would love one or two right now. I so love Va-Ruth. He's like one of the coolest peeps every. I mean he has a great personality nad you write him in such a fun way. I laughed out loud when he was doing the little protection spell thingy mo bobber. It was very very cute and i smiled lots. Well I must say that HAverick is still a little out on hte edge with me. I'm glad he told Satzine not to go though becasue it does show that Haverick cares, even if I do think there's something fishy going on wit hthat man...LETS GIVE HIM CRAMPS, then I bet I could get what's going on out of him. That or the pole he's tied to will float down river causing him to drown... Danica was so sweet at the end. I absolutely love that girl. MORE DANICA! LOL, right now i would actually just settle for more chapters :P Alighty, well I'm off to invent a pill to give men killer cramps so i can trick haverick to tell me what in the world it is you have planned... Hugs and Smooshies
Sally-from-Halloween-Town 2006-05-30 ch 4,	abuseYou have me utterly hooked. This is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Keep up the completely amazing writting. ~Sally
ArtsyTartsy86 2006-05-19 ch 3,	abuseI like filler chapters...hell I like any chapter you give me because well I'm hopelessly addicted. Seems Satzine is figuring things out...what is Haverick keeping from her and what exactly are the renegades up to. So Satzine could sense the gods coming before them all...hmm (interest peaked and mind rolling). What have you got up your sleeve? Oh look it’s a furry little kitty! :P I sensed a bit of hostility between the others and Satzine, something to do with her being a guardian I'm guessing. I like that they seemed a little more comfortable with her after the battle. She's growing on them. Haverick, though I like him, and understand that he's a worried man, who cares deeply for his lover, seemed a little I dunno strict and controlling. I have a feeling that she is more than the sweet girl next door, even if she doesn't know it and Haverick does. My ideas are getting jumbled and I think I repeated myself a few times so we're gonna end this review with a hug for you and a smile saying "You deserve every prop, pat on the back and bow at you feet that you receive. You rock girl and don't let anyone else tell you differently" Hugs and Smoochies ~Stephi ps. I like Danica…and Trendor…and …Hell I like’em all!
Silverage 2006-05-13 ch 2,	abuseo I can't wait to see how she uses her other powers. haha I could just imagine how some peopel would use that power. ~summons god~ tee hee. ~god gets angry and dissapears~ ~summons again 5 seconds later ~ why hello again! ~keels human o.o~ woops
GaelynX 2006-05-11 ch 2,	abuseOh! Two chapters in one day! I must be lucky or something...
hope for rent 2006-05-11 ch 1,	abuseGive. Me. AuryxIkana. Now. -poke poke poke poke poke poke poke poke poke poke poke poke- -yanks out sniper rifle- Anywho. I like this story (again, as usual.) I like the fact that gods can be killed, and they're not exactly all-powerful. Maybe they're just super-powerful humans that set themselves up as gods. (THIS is what happens when you give me The Da Vinci Code. I start to question the actual presence of gods/God.) Ha! Haverick's a moosehead! Wihali... sounds like Vihalri. If it's a coincidence, you're fixated. (I once had a month where all the characters' names I could come up with ended in 'y' or 'ie'.) If it's not... CONSPIRACY! In case you hadn't noticed, I'm just giving you the thoughts as they come into my head. I WOULD look for grammar mistakes, but in your stories they're almost nonexistant and I'd just give myself a headache. And the last thing I need right now is a headache. So basically, I like this story. But if it gets in the way of AuryxIkana (as it seems to be doing right now), I'll slowly start to hate it. :) PS- Did you watch American Idol this week? CHRIS IS GONE! NO! -sobs dramatically- Less than three, Indy
Silverage 2006-05-11 ch 1,	abuseO! That's awesome! More more more!
GaelynX 2006-05-11 ch 1,	abuseThat's pretty good! Yet another grand story to add to your collection...and my review list =)
ArtsyTartsy86 2006-05-11 ch 1,	abuseI just fell in love, like heart pounding, breathless, twinkle in the eye, drool worthy love. You got it all babe and I applaud. There's all that romance, with the lovey, dovey, make you smile like a loon, kisses and hugs. Then you got the I'll call it drama, with Satzine telling off Xaxi (stupid evil biotch. Leaving the poor little kiddies alone). Then there's all the action, the wonderful renegades attacking her as she runs to the nursery. You still manage to get in more romance, or lovey dovey mush with the “Sweetheart…shut the door.” My heart melted, and more importantly my heart stopped yet again when Haverick first showed up again... “'By the gods Satzine, I have missed you in my arms.' People grinned and pretended to look away, affected by the reunion. She nestled into his embrace and refused to relinquish her death grip- not that he tried. They held each other for a very long time, enough time that her arms began to ache from reaching up to him, and finally she let him go, her hands lingering on his arms, but even her hands he held onto, as if he couldn’t bear to be separated from her even that much. Then suddenly he did let go, only to take her face and kiss her suddenly, urgently, to the surprise of the crowd. Haverick had never been known to display that much affection in public, if ever. To do so in front of the entire town was surprising to say the least." ...I mean who doesn't love that. He so loves her and by the gods that just made me all giddy and squishy and warm and fuzzy. Very happy if you didn't get the pic. And I loved this line... "'Done claiming your territory, sweetheart?' Haverick asked genially, his plate resting casually in the crook of his arm as he waited to get back to his seat." ...I mean how cute was that. So as you know I have lots and lots of questions that I have already asked you and wish to spoil nothing for others so I will leave with saying... FEED MY ADDICTION NOW!

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