 Poptart Guava Kid 2009-02-11 . chapter 3hmm...i really like this one. continuing? |
 Poptart Guava Kid 2009-02-11 . chapter 2oh my god...every chapter just makes me need a hug, my baby started crying when i started crying and then he just hangs on tight to me...(i swear this kid acts way too old for his age) |
 Poptart Guava Kid 2009-02-11 . chapter 1oh my god. i read the first chapter and i already want to cry... |
 Tackygeek 2007-08-10 . chapter 3Wow, this was way better than I expected it to be. It deserves more reviews than it has, so I decided to add another one for you. I really like this story and I'm interested in seeing where it was going. If you're not going to finish it could you like at least put out the outline or whatever. I don't heh, oh well. Love the story please finish. Pretty please :( |
 diebyownhands 2006-06-21 . chapter 3very very sweet |
 Ghostmoon Dancer 2006-06-21 . chapter 3 wow. i really like the first chapters of this story. it's excellently written, and provoces a lot of feelings from the reader. great. can't wait to read more =0) Lance is such a good boyfriend. |
 BloodyDestiny 2006-06-20 . chapter 3Aw poor thing. I would hate to be that helpless. Anyways keep up the good work. |
 Jayn 2006-06-20 . chapter 3I feel so bad for Falconor, but the story is really good so far. Please update! |
 kimper 2006-06-20 . chapter 3This is really going along well. So real and alive. I'm enjoying it. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Somewhere In Between 2006-05-29 . chapter 2wow, this story is soo cool!! please update soon!
your adoring fan always :P,
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 diebyownhands 2006-05-28 . chapter 2this seems like a very touching story. I'm wondering if you will give us a bit of a background since you mentined he is only 17 so I'm wondering why they are living together wouldn't the parents be a little worried about that.
Also I find it a bit hard to believe that someone would fall so deeply in love with someone with so many... 'problems' I mean it is easy to take care and love someone like that when you have some type of conection, family or friend but just someone you meet... I really like the stoy and I will be hoping for an update |
 Lost In Thought 769 2006-05-17 . chapter 2aw this story is soo cute! can't wait to see more of it! |
 Weeee 2006-05-17 . chapter 2 This is such a cute story! I loved your first chapter too! PLease update soon I want to know what will happen next. :) |
 BloodyDestiny 2006-05-16 . chapter 2Good I like it. I kinda feel sorry for both of them. Keep up the good work. |
 Violent Pornography 2006-05-16 . chapter 2holy crap you have researched the crap outta Bipolar conditions and it shows! Its a great story, I love the plot and the charactors are really cute.It's different from other stories I've read and I like it. Your present tense is good. Keep Writing!! |