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Bloodfeeder94 2008-06-07 ch 14,	abusethis story is quite good. I like the part about what you said about finishing the story for Friday; I feel the same way about my own characters.
RedAmethyst 2008-06-05 ch 24,	abuseGood god... normally I wouldn't review a chapter in the middle of a story and just do a general overview at the end but this was absolutely amazing. Not enough writer's give me that weird hot trembly feeling I get in scenes as emotionally charged as that one. Not many writer's can actually convey emotions realistically but you did it wonderfully. You're bloody brilliant!
pallid-bat 2008-05-30 ch 31,	abuseMaybe I'm just a loyal person and all, but how could Friday's friends just watch when he was practically getting beaten up?? Can't get my head round it :P (yes I realise its fiction...but still!) Cute story, especially Friday! Not sure about Adrian, I didn't really like him (hated Alexa too...) Hope you do a sequel of some sort!
Qryous 2008-05-27 ch 31,	abuseThank you Natasha, thank you Tuesday, and damn compuer breakdowns to hell. Adrian is really the sort of character that you don't come across often, the kind where you actually dislike him for a lot of things. He really is a bastard, god, if he wasn't sure, he should have just stayed single. But that's really a big part of the plot, and how you manage to make the story so much more emotional, so yes; the perfect story with the perfect ending :)
MicroQueen15 2008-05-13 ch 29,	abuseThis story is so freakin good! I guess I'll go finish but this chapter made me cry as stupid as that sounds, but I was listening to "Santa Clara" by The National. It was just really emotional and you voiced the characters emotions perfectly. I also have to say that I do love the character of Alexa. Nice, very nice.
Duuude 2008-05-11 ch 31,	abuseOmgsh. Such a beautiful ending. So very beautiful. I love Adrian's little speech, I love Friday's mother, she's amazing. I love Friday himself. I love you for writing such a beautiful story. It was so good. And I think the ending was just perfect. It led right back to the place they're always so comfortable in, Friday's room. It's funny how everyone expected them to get together, Alexa, Adrian's mom and dad, Adam, Gabriella and Friday's dad and even Felicia. I love the ending. It's a good one. And that whole thing with Alexa living with the art teacher was a nice twist. Haha. Good story, I'm pretty surprised that you were younger than me when you wrote this. You sound really wise in your author notes. I don't know, I just automatically assumed you were older. Fifteen, eh? well this was written in 2006, so you're either my age or older.. . now. Awesome story. Great plot. Loved it.
Duuude 2008-05-11 ch 26,	abuseHaha. Maladetto. My dad says that ALL the time when he's mad. XD The Italian language is pretty awesome, eh? He also says Merde. Ha. I know what it means. I actually understood their Italian! I'm pround of myself. XD
Duuude 2008-05-11 ch 25,	abuseNO! Why does he want to give them another try? What's wrong with him? He can't just make out with Friday and jump right back into their relationship! That doesn't make sense! NO! ahem sorry, I'm just really into the plot. It's very intriguing... is that the word? I don't know.. but it pulls you in. Which is why I've been reading this like a maniac and not leaving any sort of review. . . You said you were Pagan? I didn't even know that was a modern day religion.. and my knowledge of Paganism goes as far as Adrians.. XD Anyway. Awesome story. I love how you incorporated different types of people rather than your average story that has mostly white characters. HA. I'm sorry but it's true. I'm not white btw. No offense to anyone. Great story. I feel like kicking Adrian's butt and telling him to jump Friday's pants. Plus, I love how you incorporate Bob Marely into your music. He was a pretty cool guy. I actually don't listen to his songs though... Eheheh. All I know is One Love. I'm proud to say I knew it a long time ago.. My music teacher in middle school used to make us listen to Bob Marley and put our heads down and relax. He was pretty cool. Ha. Awesome story. Can't wait to finish reading it. And I'll miss it when I'm done. Love Friday's character. LOVE it.
tia-blue 2008-05-04 ch 31, anon.	abuseWe! I just re-read this for about the gazzilionth time! I love it so much!
IzandriaJohnson 2008-04-29 ch 31,	abuseAbsolutely an enjoyable read.
theGreyPebble 2008-04-19 ch 31,	abusebeautiful. i love this... it was really touching. i never hated alexa XD but what she did kind of pissed me off
KayB 2008-04-19 ch 31,	abuseI loved this. Everything about this I enjoyed. I've never became sorta emotionally involved. Well...not emotionally...but the whole time I was reading this I became very anxious and tense. It was a beatiful.
Anonymous 2008-04-05 ch 31, anon.	abuseI can't explain what this story have done to me. It's beautiful and all, I really fell in love with your characters, but it's something more. The plot seens so simple, just two friends in love and all the complication of their relationship, the acceptance of their own feelings, etc., but it's not just that. It's a simple story with something more. I don't think I can explain, at least not now. Just a note: you have talked about how people don't like Alexa and how you find it strange. Well, I like her. She's a very sweet girl, a really nice girlfriend and I guess she would be a great friend. Sometimes she was annoying, because I couldn't believe how she was mean to Friday, but I undestand her, after all. I really feel sorry for her, but she'll be ok, and, as Adrian's brother said: Andrian and Friday were made for each other. Great story. Thank you and congratulations. P.S.: fifteen? wow.
the-truth-is-verity 2008-03-31 ch 31,	abuseaw, WOW! amazing. beautiful, beautiful story! i almost cried at the end. in the happy way. great!
kanari kireteru doll 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseOkay, so the fact that you quoted Bob Marley means that you now have my undying attention. I shall send you a GIANT review once I am done reading this =) so be on the lookout jaja. -arielle

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