You ARE going to continue this aren't you? Because it's not worth just sitting there gathering dust and casting shadows in your mind...it's an awesome piece...hope you continue it!

Awesome ending! Gotta love S&M!

Oh my God! I know I shouldn't be laughing, but I am...

This reminds me of something I might write.

How'd you know what I do after school??

I loved how the reader slowly realizes what is about to be discovered, but not really-you know?

I just kept thinking-"They're killers...no, wait, they're secret agents...no...AHA! They're torturers!"

And then: "Oh... dude... they're... torturers."

Excellent dialogue sequence. You capture voices perfectly!