this is absulutly beautiful! keep writing!

~SarahJane

Having seen what lies behind those beautiful eyes of yours, I know that you speak the truth. Wonderful revelations.

positively inspiring. the last 'but' would have been an 'and', i think. otherwise, very good -md-

I like this... but it could be longer... Write On!

Ooh! This is very pretty. Good poem! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^