Wow, I was totally holding my breath the entire fighting sequence until the Grey Brothers left. I'm not very familiar with the creatures you named in this story, but I think I was able to follow along pretty well. Is this a part of another story? Or is there more to this one? Either way, it's very well written without any mistakes that come to mind. ANd like I said, the suspense was amazing. May good writings continue to you. ~Moni Jane

This was very interesting. It was different, and I liked it. 'Tis a shame it's only a one shot; I would be interested to see any more adventures Dep and Leon could have.

Your summary caught me, as well as the title. Man, was that a great read. I honest to goodness couldn't get enough of it, and the descripition was wonderful...Battlescenes are usually hard for me to envision, but this one was not. It flowed seamlessly in my head.