The first stanza is lovely - really nicely worded. Lovely idea too. :D

Oh, sorry these reviews are so late - I'm only just getting through my huge list of stories and poems I'm behind on. Sorry it's taken me so long.

Loved the ending! Completely awesome!

I feel that I can relate to this poem. I really thought it was well written, and I can't think of anything I would change about it. It's kind of sad, but hey, so is life. I don't have to tell you to keep writing, I know you will.

sigh, sullen poem, but powerful stuff. Well written, good job :D