 Orange Oxymoron 2009-09-30 . chapter 1Sounds like me. |
 Lone Lily in the Garden 2008-10-25 . chapter 1I love that line, "Repeat them, if that's what it takes for them to sink in." It is like a really great song!! I love this poem..and finally I think I am beginning to know who I really am!! |
 A Beautiful Nightmare 2006-05-21 . chapter 1Wow. Strong words... and a great last line to finish it off... no mistakes I could find... keep it up! |
 Former Kimmi Gray 2006-05-11 . chapter 1I LOVE THIS. Period. The end. Bravo and so true Trish, bravo and so true. |
 ADSpencer 2006-05-11 . chapter 1Oh, crap. I know what that's about. . . *Spike tease* Made a great poem! Awesome work, Trish! |