   TammyS3 2008-06-20 . chapter 15Aw! Poor you! Stil...UPDATE!:D |
 Maxegirl1313 2008-05-05 . chapter 15i luff it!1
Very good!
update soon! |
 Rocking Devil 2008-02-08 . chapter 14 U so gotta update! PLz do update soon... |
 Shot Glass 2007-04-29 . chapter 14Aww...god I got warm fuzzies... |
| midnightsun 2007-04-29 . chapter 14 i love it. :) |
 Jugglingbearperformer 2007-03-27 . chapter 13Lovely updates! Thankyou! I love this story, update soon. =) |
 eliza-smiles 2007-02-11 . chapter 13i really like this, and i cannot wait to see what you do with it... it would totally suck have 'visions' of random stuff...any ways cheers |
 dawn's unforgiving darkness 2007-01-24 . chapter 13? |
 tornangelwings 2007-01-24 . chapter 13this is really good, i have been following it ever since the beginning. the evolution of the characters is amazing. the feeling just pours off the page. |
 Musiclover066520 2007-01-21 . chapter 13wow this is really good! i hope you can update soon! |
 Foreverswimming 2007-01-19 . chapter 13Yea! It's an update! I am so happy! It was a good chapter, I really can't wait for more! |
 The Midnights Sun 2007-01-18 . chapter 13GOOD JOB!
UPDATE SOON!
I LOVE IT! |
 N.S. Blanchard 2007-01-13 . chapter 3"Nothing. Thanks a lot We'll be going now." Travis said, glancing at me.
In this sentence, you need to put a period in between 'lot' and 'We'll'.
Just thought I'd point it out. |
| tornangelwings 2006-12-25 . chapter 12 this story is expertly written, i sincerely hope you keep writing this. |
| Foreverswimming 2006-12-21 . chapter 1 Wow, that was a great story I hope you continue it and update real soon please! |
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