Sometimes, the best pieces are the simplest. This one exemplifies that :). Good job!

wow. deep! Respect man! ;)

I like the poem, but I wasn't sure if what this relationship was. Was it an abusive relationship, or just an argument they had for the first time? Sorry for being confusedish... @.@

Aww mgosh this is adorably sweet. Made me feel tingly all over. People tend to neglect the reality of love...Marriage is so beautiful :)