I love this one too, the imagery and the style is just heartbreakingly amazing.

E... kinda hard to follow.. eyes wanna continue down... but then there's the side lines... such space between them? Me not know. But I do love the poem!

"...leather trust"... XDD Rofl! You crack me up!

yeah . . . i like potatoes . . .kidding. no really, i do. and i like this poem too. you already read it to me and i already told u i liked the first two lines. i like the 2 stanzas that start with "wish" and "dance". they are vivid and colorful, but sad and lonely too. and yet i like! and there for with shall have been ur review my love! X3

"let depression be your masterpiece"

THAT line inspires me for some reason. It reminds me of a friend of mine, but yeah - amazing poem, the imagery is scary, like a horror movie. Darn it, loved every line!