 Charley Keed 2006-06-13 . chapter 1A similar theme as "The Magezine Says Nothing", but a bit more poetic. Once again, really good job and I really enjoyed reading it. I love the voice you use when narrating your words, it's very mature and reflective, yet it draws the reader in as well. My favorite line was the last one, because it nicely summed up most of the paper. I think your work would confuse the reader who does not think, but will fascinate those who do. |