Wow, thatis so good. Hope you write more. bekah

ok great story but ya why is it so long i like wasted 37 hole hours reading this thing and school starts on tuesday o my god schol starts on tuesday

great story but the people person who plays me how come all he does is make out with Ama?

Really good etariel, I can' wait to see what happens. Bekah

Wow. I love this story-your mixing of fantasy and romance is great.

I don't know. Your heroines are a bit too willing to believe in fairies and dreams. Stillm this story is rather pleasant and enjoyable, especially with the fairies coming through to our world and looking normal. I like the description and addition you put in about the female fairy talking with the one girl, because it was a bit quirky, as fairies are noted to be.

I also like the rules for mortals to go in Faerie. That was pretty neat.