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| Valentina 2006-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI *really* liked this poem, the last line was good but with how the poem was going i would have seen the last line of more of; Because, honey I'm the mistake you'll always love to make. Or something along the lines of that, other than that pretty cool poem |
| Pricilla Grey 2006-05-12 ch 1,  | abuseI love everything about this poem, except the last line feels almost...anti-climatic? I don't know, other than that, I think it's very well written. - Pricilla Grey |