OH! I really liked the way you had the sister react to the death of the other one. I am going to enjoy reading the rest of the stories.

My. Very powerful. I'm a fan of short paragraphs for some reason; adds to certain emphasises, I think. Wonderful job of creating image and aura in a very few amount of words. Well done.

I'm reminded of the movie "Serenity." Ever seen?

Exceedingly well written and an interesting perspective from which for me to see the story. The tale of the younger sister has a sense of innocence about it that the eldest will never have.

Excellent work.

Hahaha love her attempts at reasoning early on there XD Osis is still *incredibly* cool. It's so heartwarming to know the Goddess' tea was more important to her than the permanent introduction of evil into the human race... And I like your vivid and graphic descriptions of the dying and the choking and all the blood around afterwards and such! Very impressive and memorable ^^

NAMES!! *FINALLY*!! I mean I love saying Æþel as much as the next person, but *geez* those special characters can be a pain sometimes. And it's nice actually having something to call her sister besides "her sister", you know?

And on that note, ohh so that's what she's like! Back then anyway. I'd sure like to read *more* stories where Isis is around though... XDD

Anyway yeah, another great story highlighted by the intense and graphic death scene that won't be leaving me anytime soon (oh what joy indeed XDD)