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| ladym33 2006-06-26 ch 1,   | Great job Christopher! A very touching story. I loved the last line. |
| Cheeseraptor5 2006-05-21 ch 1, | Personally, I prefer some seriously disturbing violence mixed in with my touching moments, but hey, that's just me. Good job. |
| peterson23 2006-05-18 ch 1, | Chris; You really did a great job with the story. I was amazed at how you moved me through the story. If your dream is to be a writter don't stop, you have potential. maybe one day I'll be reading a book by CK. Great job at making your mom feel special. You are right mother's are the perfect gift and never take that for granted. Good luck If I'm ever on here again I'll keep an eye out for another story. Sincerely Mr. Peterson P.S. Tell Darth Paul AKA your dad I say hi. |
| Philosophy101 2006-05-14 ch 1, | really sentimental...although, what kind of mother would be comfortable with her 14 year old son running around the world alone? |