i really love this poem...it's got an eerie quality, and yet i sense a gentle tone behind it, of course that could be just my imagination. keep it up.

This isn't for this particular piece, but for your work in general, a handful of which I've read. Since there's no way to just comment your profile, this is as close as I can get:

I marvel at how much you write; it seems as if you never go more than a week without doing something new. They are all so lengthy too. Even my longest poems are shorter than an average one of yours.

In 3 years, I've hardly written 40 poems, and in half that time you've written over double. I'm not even a quarter the poet you are!

Although I don't agree with, or fancy, some of your work, I still admire your creative energy. I wish I could catch up some day. ;D

holy crap..i don't know how you do it...