Okay. That was very sweet :)

Alrighty. So overall, I loved both stories very much. I think it would've been extremely fun and interesting to explore Laila being pregnant, but I completely understand why you jumped the five years (overall, it works better this way. But still! Laila. Pregnant. That would be so hilarious and sweet!)

In the two stories, I often got a little disoriented at the time spacing (you would spend three chapters on one day, and then skip a month) but again, that really can't be helped (unless you wrote 108 chapters each... then again, that wouldn't be too bad :P :P)

Also. Sorry, I have to mention it. The bride walks down the aisle (the isle you used is the thingy with the water and the land... yeah, you know what I mean :P an example being "Isle of Lesbos")

But despite all of that, I really enjoyed the story, and I just LOVE Trent! He's so cute and terrible at times. And I thought it was really sweet when he blushed about getting aroused by Laila in a bikini. They are such a cute couple! Thanks for posting :P

Ah, the story gave me the warm fuzzy feeling, so well done :D

Oh good. I'm glad you meant her to be a virgin back in the first story, because it wouldn't make sense any other way (she didn't now how to french kiss ...)

:) Alright, I just spent a day reading this story... only the epi left, and I'm feeling a little sad. Shall write you another review when I come out of the other side!

I really enjoyed reading this story and its prequel. I liked the story and how you worked it and the pacing. You did apologize for grammar and spelling errors, so I'll let them slide. Great job!

read this and the first story LOVED EM :) just adding you too my faves so i had to write something xD

youre storie is so god. i lurv it alot and congrats in making sucha gud riter! bi bi! xx

great story!
LUV IT :D

Good story!
Jaliy!~

Aww.. Cute ending. :D I was wondering if you were gonna write a story for Aiden. That'll be pretty fun to read.

Um ... wow, this is a really great and sweet story! Love it!

i loved it! TRENT AND MITCHELL ARE AMAZING!
charlotte

Amazing story =] I read the other one too, but then when i saw there was a sequel i just kept on reading and didnt review [[sorry!!]] =]

woohoo! great story! i love it.

ohh i just love it! :D :D :D
i read this in one sitting, the prequel last night. :P
heheheh. thanks for the wonderful story!! :D :D :D
it was so darn cute and so darn awesome! :D :D :D
lol

wow. i feel so empty.
im really going to miss these characters
they were developed so well, and the whole
story was so.. wow... that i even overlooked
the sometimes confusing typos.
haha. awesome. i loved this story.
and MHN too :]

what happend to skipper? :[