Woo Hoo! Nice twist that actually took me by surprise. Poor guy. I guess that's what happens when you're a homicidal perv...

Nice. Real nice. I never expected the ending. I felt bad for the girl in the beginning, but in the end.. well what can I say, except that in a twisted, cruel way.. I love it.

Nice twist at the end! One of the more unique pieces I've read.

Haha, yeah, I wasn't sure about the details (there were a few more, but I felt dirty, so I took them out.).. but I had to keep them so y'all'd get a feel for the situation and the ending.

Thanks for the reviews!

Aha! excellent twist! I was worried it was gonna get a bit too descriptive if you know what I mean, but I think the description of his 'lust' was necessary as it gave things an even bigger kick at the end. Slightly worrying, how you thought of some of the description though - the bit about 'suckling glands' bursting... I nearly threw up! lol... ok well good job, see ya! xx

A guilty pleasure of mine too.

Well writen- impressive- envolved.