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| Captain Lucky 2007-01-08 ch 1,  | abuseAngels...what an inspiring concept. I really like this poem. It's very uplifting, reminds me that no one needs to feel alone. I especially like the last stanza. |
| Saikai 2006-12-25 ch 1, | abuseI don't have a religion, but I could certainlyunderstand this...i love how you can explain anything to anyone, and make them understand completely. I also love your rhyming skills. Can you rhyme anything with the word purple or orange? ~NEPHTHYS. 5 stars 10 out of 10 |
| Chase Chaos 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThanks for reading my story, and I came to check out yours as well. Your stuff is amazing, I decided to read through most of it first, and everything I`ve read so far is great ^^ I hope you keep writing. |
| toxic-noodle725 2006-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh that was a lovely poem. i was greatly inspired. im sure ur angel is pretty proud. kudos! |
| Blackrose Ki 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem, and it must be nice to have a guardian angel! :) anyways, I mainly sent this just to talk to you. I read the reveiw you wrote on that person who was wondering how we could love God and I think what you said was wonderful! Its so hard to find strong devoted christians these days even in as much of a religious community as mine! Well anyways I just wanted to say hi! "And may the God of Peace be with you" Romans 3:33. God Bless! |
| myheartwantsyou 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abusethis is very good, not overly thougth out and it has real emotion. i wanted to thank you for the review on my poem question, although i cant bring myself to agree i appreciate the different point of view, thank you for that. blessed be. |
| HereForNow 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abusethis is so beautiful, your faith shines through the words and creates a very strong emotion. great job! |
| mysterieslady 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was really sweet. Great job in writing it. It was awesome! |
| sunshineofyourlife 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseit's beautiful. i think the change was necessary to make the poem what it is. i love reviewing your work! you're going in my favorites! --Sunshine |
| Aluminum Tinkerbell 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! I wish I had your faith...which I obviously don't. And I wish I could write poems this well! |
| samwise606 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is a nice one. It's good of God to employ angels to protect and help us when we need it. Glad to know that this has blessed your life. Praise the Lord!God bless, Samwise Oh yeah, and thanks for your review! |
| Prisoner of Dreams 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. I love it.And the rhyme flows perfectly... good job!! ^_^ Oh, and thanks so much for reviewing! |
| Tad Zendol 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, I thought that this was a very soft, kind of light poem. No... Wait... No... It was deep, but it was kind of more like a highly educated child saying it, which made it really great. I love the last verse (do you call them verses? No. That's for songs. But that's all I can think of currently...). It was very nice. But the last line was my favorite. |
| simpleplan13 2006-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI like this.. it's very sweet & well done |
| tropica9989 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abusesweet. i like this one. guardian angels do so much. |