The unperverted innocence of a child...what beauty.

This poem really makes you think about how humans are. However, I have to say that when I reading the start of it I was just a bit confused. Just a little... Nevertheless, it is very wonderful topic that you chose and it has a will of its own.

Oh thank you from your review on Masterpiece of the Sky. I thank you for your advice.

the poem over all is wonderful however the shift is a bit randomly done. Its well done but with the flow of the begging of the poem i think it was a tad overboard