Good, and now I get it sorry, you have the original and the english translation...whoops, well that won't happen again. Can't blame me I'm just a kid!

I love the fact that you're talented enough to translate poems you wrote originally in your native tongue to english. In couldn't IMAGINE being that good.

I believe this is a poem that I will like more every time I read it. I mean, don't get me wrong, I like it now, but it just feels like one of those that gets better at each reading. One part that particularly stuck out to me is "A place we never lived in We only lived in our dreams of the future And in our twisted memories of the past" I can definitely relate to this, the feeling of only looking ahead or behind, and never really looking around at what's going on in the now. The words just contain so much.

I love your poetry - you always convey so much emotion and feeling and everything!

Much love...TinuvielDork

P.S. Thank you for your reviews! They make me feel so happy. :)

First off...thank you for the translation! ^^

This was very pretty and had some interesting thoughts. I think we as humans sometimes get so caught up in the past, we forget about the present and more importantly, our future. Amazing message. Keep writing!