I really like the imager you use here; it's very vivid. The message is also interesting. I especially like the last two lines; they really sum up the whole theme of the poem. Overall, nice job!

Very nice ending -- the impact of the last two lines is great.

Vocab's fantastic (sorry, I've been eschewing articles lately) and I think the repetition of "and" a couple of times throughout the verses helps it flow nicely.

Sorry, I suck at reviewing poetry, but I wanted to let you know especially that I liked the last two lines.

Oh, wow. I ususally enjoy your poems, but this one is really fabulous. Beautiful! Beautiful! AND it rhymes!

I will probably have to return at some point when I am in a less rapturous state to give you a real review for this, because all I can manage at the moment is WOW! Gorgeous! Wonderful! I LOVE this! It's REALLY just... wow.

Imagery was wonderful "And smoke from many smokestacks, poisoning/Even the salt air and the sea-fresh fog" Very creative

Ending was fabulous. Loved it to death; also like how you end it with a question, leaves the ending sort of "open"