**, now that touched me. original, a breath of fresh air...i like how you turned cliches on their heads. one thing though, not sure if you meant 'babies breathe sprout from the soil' or 'babies breath sprout from the soil'...but i got the gist. great work.

Again, I think the end is the best. ^^ "You are the folded pages of books/The ones I've read a thousands times."

The rest of the imagery throughout the poem was good as well, and the *idea* (waves hand vaguely) got through. Short yet sweet. =)

It seems unfinished to me, but other than that I liked it.