Cool! I really like this! Speaking of which, there's an anime called Hinotori. This story might turn out good! I'm adding this to my favorites! You're a good writer and you should keep on writing. Since, I reviewed, wanna see my story? I'm recently working on chapter 4 of it right now. Wanna see my story? If you ever get the time, review all the chapters of it if you can! Tell me if you like it or not. Update soon!

Hey, how's it going? Wow, you and Ann have both started up something new, and i'm just dilly-dallying around ><

Anyways, I'm pretty impressed with your first chapter. It certainly sounds interesting, although I'm hoping there will be more character interaction in the future. Possibly with the Hikari grandsom (dunno why I'm curious about him).

I'm guessing this isn't anything you've told me about yet, although I do recognize the name "Setsuna" that you were thinking about ^^

Keep writing!

Well, I'm impressed. I like this story. You can garunteed I'll be back again.

You did a good job with the story, the grammar and spellin gwas great. THe story looks good. So I'll be here when you update again