I really liked this last line...poignant and striking.

As with your other stories, it's simply beautiful! I love romance!

I really like it.

So we have two Icaruses, both believing the other to be the sun. Crash and burn. Ouch. But anyway, I thought this one was really nice and ... well, realistic, plot be damned. Critisism, I can't think of any at the moment. I loved the whole thing, really. Promisefiction deluxe. :)

Nice flow. I like the dialogue and characters, and maybe it didn't have a plot, but I don't think it needed one. It worked very well for what it was.