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| Mousie Moolie 2006-05-20 ch 1,  | abuseAs with your other stories, it's simply beautiful! I love romance! |
| cbprice25 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like it. |
| Aibari 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseSo we have two Icaruses, both believing the other to be the sun. Crash and burn. Ouch. But anyway, I thought this one was really nice and ... well, realistic, plot be damned. Critisism, I can't think of any at the moment. I loved the whole thing, really. Promisefiction deluxe. :) |
| CitizenOfZozo 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseNice flow. I like the dialogue and characters, and maybe it didn't have a plot, but I don't think it needed one. It worked very well for what it was. |