I loved it. Can totally relate to it too. It's very rock-songish, which is excellent. My favourite is the last three verses..."won't wave the white flag" is SO rockstarish!!Agh, do you KNOW how much bullying exists in a socialistic economy? And how much teachers bully students to study the day before school ends? Isn't that horrible? DAMMIT!

lol.. nice. i've read this before lol. so, yeah. still brings out some emotions in me. must mean SOMETHING, right?

This is a really good first poem. It brigns out a lot of emotions in the first stanza, and that one was my favorite. I think the end was good, but a bit young, maybe because it was written a while ago. All in all though, it's a great poem, and I hope that these problems from bullying are over now.

Not good at poetry? I disagree. This was a brilliant piece, I like your style. Great work.