Ooh, update soon! There are a few quick typos in various places in this story, but other than that, this is excellent. Really hope you update soon!
Happy Writing!
~HawkDancer

Ooh, poor Sarah. I like the diary style of this story. Not many spelling mistakes (just "...keep our humbe apartment beautiful...", it's "humble", but I'm sure that's a typo.) Grammar's excellent... I'm gonna' keep reading. ^.^
Happy Writing!
~HawkDancer

Whoa. keep going! PLEASE!

*sniffwhimper*

You're too good.

*adores 'Another day, another bruise'*

Her life is so ordinary and so tragic...

I love the way you create her fantasy world, then dash it with the domesticity of her everyday life.

So accurate and creepy it sent shivers down my spine... that's a good thing, by the way.

Aww.

I remember this...this is utterly heart breaking...you're such a good writer

This is really sad. The tittle freaked me out... if you read my profile you understand a little, but the guy i talked about played this song for me, and said I was the angel. It fits in so well with your story... sigh. I can really relate to it too...Amazing. Are you going to add any more chapters?~Alice~