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| Edae 2007-11-18 ch 1,  | abuseokay, you have a ** gift. I've now read everything by you and loved it all. Feel proud man. |
| The Ducky Pirate 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis probably the best poem I've read on this site so far. I love the imagery, I love the way it ryhmes (sp?) I just all around love it. ^_^ |
| Dawnella 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is frankly really freaky. But still I love your rhymes, and it flows well. |
| Baxter-Baxter 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseGood... not my favorite. I just didn't like the eye part. |
| Socially-Awkward 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseWhats wrong with being crazy...?lol I like this, even if the imagery is a bit nasty. Very morbid and disturbing, in ture poet style. |
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseI was watching CSI last night & people ripped out eyes. . . . I really like the imagery. it's like you're in an asylum. . . |
| Princess-anna57 2006-05-28 ch 1, | abuseGood job! I like! Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Aluminum Tinkerbell 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThanks for the review! This is a bit scary, yet written wonderfully! The imagery is, one again, amazing. It's just raw emotion. Which is, of course, the best type of poetry! |
| xXJESSEXMUFFINNNNSSSXx 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThere is no hell... By the way great poem! It's really good! Creepy as well... I likey alot. |
| Cait Street 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseholy **...imagery is fantastic. Well done. Its creepy but oh so awsome. Nice work =)!! |
| Holiday in Spain 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseI can't say I disagree with you. |
| Oh fuck this 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuse'Sokay. You don't have to tell me/us anything. Then I/we'd have to return the favor, and I know I don't know who you are. This type of poetry seems to be running rampant on the site. I don't mind though. You've done it very well. -Ivy |
| method acting 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThis may mean nothing to you, but things will be all right. I may not really even know you, but you're a good person. Jaysus, it'll be okay. Just, breathe a bit. Think of me. Don't ** yourself up. |